Talk:Muda, Mura and Muri
From apppm
Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | The text sounds comprehensible and it builds on references |
| Language | OK |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | OK, no mention to which aspect of Portfolio, Program, Project management can be applied |
| Purpose explanation | Is there but clear for the reader |
| Title of the Wiki | OK |
| References | OK |
Other
The abstract describe three concepts but fails to describe to which aspect of Portfolio, Program, Project management can be applied.
The abstract also should consider to provide a better formulation of the purpose intended with the article.
