Talk:Hoshin Kanri
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Abstract Feedback
Text clarity Text is coherent
Language Good
Description of the tool/theory/concept How does this relate to project management rather than just organizational management or a "TEMO-style" report? This should be emphasized and clarified in the abstract
Purpose explanation This needs improvement. Consider:
- Is this related to project/program/portfolio management?
- Who is the reader? Project Manager or Sponsor ect?
- Briefly explain the structure of the article and the points to be discussed to set the reader's expectations
References Missing appropriate references to mandatory list of references
Relevance of article The reader needs to be convinced this article is relevant. Consider the following:
- What kind of issues does this concept address?
- Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search
