Talk:Work Breakdown Structure in Construction Management
Abstract Feedback
Text clarity Text is good, but avoid writing bullet points in the abstract. The text should flow
Language Good
Description of the tool/theory/concept well addressed, but try to use the word "scope" in the abstract - as in a work breakdown structure is a tool used breakdown the scope of a project
Purpose explanation Good, but needs development. Consider:
- Who is the reader? Project Manager or team etc?
References Missing references to the list of mandatory references/standards
Relevance of article Consider the following:
- It is okay to use examples from the Metro Cityring project, but remember it is not allowed to write the article as a case study. The course requirements have changed
- Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search