Talk:Roles and responsibilities

Text clarity The text sounds coherent

Language Can be improved. I did not understand this for example: "Project manager and team with structure, processes, models and tools represent the core from which the project grows."

Description of the tool/theory/concept OK

Purpose explanation Missing - What is the purpose of the article? What aspect of project management are you trying to address? Who is your reader? Are you focusing on a particular industry e.g. construction? How is this relevant for the project manager?

Title of the Wiki Can be more specific - this depends on the focus of your article

References Good reference to PMBOK. Be cautious when addressing websites. I would never reference blogs. Use the PMI (Project Management Institute) site instead for example.

General Remember when writing the article, that it needs to be in the right depth and not too generic

Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Ioannis Papadantonakis

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Quality of the summary:

Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?

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Structure and logic of the article:

Is the argument clear?

Is there a logical flow to the article?

Does one part build upon the other?

Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

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Grammar and style:

Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

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Figures and tables:

Are figures and tables clear?

Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

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Interest and relevance:

Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

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Depth of treatment:

Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

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Annotated bibliography:

Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

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