Talk:Benefits of systems engineering
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Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity & language | The text can be coherent. It seems that the abstract isn't finalized yet. This is fine, but make sure to not minimize the use of bullets etc. There's also some grammatical errors, so please read it over again. |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | Good. |
| Article purpose explanation | Good. However consider further scoping your article. Try to cover less areas, but in more depth? Disclaimer: A complete judgement cannot be made until the abstract is finalized. |
| Relevance to curriculum | Relevant. However, always ensure this is kept within the realms of project/program/portfolio management. |
| References | Add some of the listed references in your abstract, if it makes sense to do so. |
