Talk:BIM as a project management tool on construction companies
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Feedback on Abstract
| Text clarity | Good but needs improvement. Also attention to punctuation and capital letters |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | Good |
| Explanation of the purpose of the article | Ok |
| Relevance to curriculum | Good |
| References | Missing references. Here are the guidelines from DTU Library: https://www.bibliotek.dtu.dk/english/servicemenu/find/reference_management/references |
| Other | Write the complete name of the method before writing only the initials. Example: Building Information Model (BIM) |
Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Hannah Kürshcner
Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
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Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear? Yes
Is there a logical flow to the article? Yes
Does one part build upon the other? Yes
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions? Yes
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Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? Some small mistakes
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
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Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
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Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
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Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
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Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
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