Talk:Designing Organizational Structure
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Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity & language | Good |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | Ok |
| Article purpose explanation | Needs to elaborated |
| Relevance to curriculum | It could be relevant but make sure you keep the focus within portfolio management. It seems you are focusing more on organisational management, which is not not relevant for the curriculum |
| References | Missing references. Here are some guidelines from DTU Library: https://www.bibliotek.dtu.dk/english/servicemenu/find/reference_management/references |
| Other | Make sure you clearly define the scope of the project |
Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Brynja Benediktsdóttir
Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 1
It sums up really nicely what is intended to do in the article and the title is explained thoroughly. As nothing else has been uploaded it can’t be compared to the article itself.
Question 2 · TEXT
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 2
Not applicable – only abstract. Promising when reading the abstract.
Question 3 · TEXT
Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 3
Good grammar, nicely written.
Question 4 · TEXT
Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 4
Not applicable
Question 5 · TEXT
Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 5
Practical for organizations
Question 6 · TEXT
Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 6
Not applicable – only abstract
Question 7 · TEXT
Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 7
Not applicable
