Talk:Agile Project Management

Review by secna

Overall a good article, which gives a good overview into what agile PM is and relevant within the topics of PM.

• It would improve the understanding of agile if you start out with a very short intro to what is agile PM is before you start the history of the method it will make it easier to follow.

• The amount of references that you have found is good, and when you read the article it really shows that it have been carefully investigated. But when you just write “it can be found in [x], then atleast I thought it was ruining the reading flow, I think it would help if you also added the name of the article that your referring to in the text.

• Is there any related methods/standards that can be used together with agile PM?

• Its nice figure which gives a good overview of the APM model, remember to refer to the figure in the text.

Review by Dunseiz

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This article is very well disposed and well argued. Good job! I have therefore focused my review on technical and formal stuff that in my opinion could lift the article. Enjoy :)

REFERENCES

The references are done manually as far as I can see. I have taken the liberty and made reference 1 to 4 "linked" for you. No. 4 differs slightly in coding due to the multiple usage. They can be copied/pasted and modified to fit the rest of the references.

Thank you for the example. I have corrected the referencing to be linked.

LAYOUT

There are many short sections in the introduction which can be a bit difficult to separate. This is mainly due to the line spacing when jumping to next line. Maybe you could use more sub-sub titles to separate these short sections or maybe just make an extra space between them?

I agree that the short sections can be difficult to separate due to the formatting of linespacing in the wiki setup. If I introduce subsub(sub) headings it will will give me sub headings with four numbers, e.g. 2.2.1.1 Rolling wave planning, which I believe also will confuse the reader. I looked at some of the other articles and the linespacing seems to be a common issue due to the wiki setup. I will therefore leave it as it is, in order for it to fit the general style of all the articles in this wiki.

GRAMMAR

word contractions are usually not used in written language. "...agile methodologies often don’t separate between..." should be "...agile methodologies often do not separate between..." "In many cases agile methodologies doesn’t even use..." should be "In many cases agile methodologies do not even use..."

I have corrected all the word contractions to be separate words now