Talk:BIM as a project management tool on construction companies

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==Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: ''Hannah Kürshcner''==
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===Question 1 · TEXT===
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'''Quality of the summary:'''
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Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 1===
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''Answer here''
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===Question 2 · TEXT===
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'''Structure and logic of the article:'''
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Is the argument clear? Yes
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Is there a logical flow to the article? Yes
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Does one part build upon the other? Yes
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Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions? Yes
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What would you suggest to improve? -
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===Answer 2===
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''Answer here''
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===Question 3 · TEXT===
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'''Grammar and style:'''
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Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? Some small mistakes
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Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 3===
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''Answer here''
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===Question 4 · TEXT===
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'''Figures and tables:'''
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Are figures and tables clear?
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Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 4===
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''Answer here''
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===Question 5 · TEXT===
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'''Interest and relevance:'''
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Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
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Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 5===
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''Answer here''
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===Question 6 · TEXT===
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'''Depth of treatment:'''
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Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
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Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 6===
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''Answer here''
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===Question 7 · TEXT===
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'''Annotated bibliography:'''
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Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
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Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
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Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 7===
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''Answer here''

Latest revision as of 12:45, 26 February 2019

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[edit] Feedback on Abstract

Text clarity Good but needs improvement. Also attention to punctuation and capital letters
Description of the tool/theory/concept Good
Explanation of the purpose of the article Ok
Relevance to curriculum Good
References Missing references. Here are the guidelines from DTU Library: https://www.bibliotek.dtu.dk/english/servicemenu/find/reference_management/references
Other Write the complete name of the method before writing only the initials. Example: Building Information Model (BIM)


[edit] Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Hannah Kürshcner

[edit] Question 1 · TEXT

Quality of the summary:

Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 1

Answer here

[edit] Question 2 · TEXT

Structure and logic of the article:

Is the argument clear? Yes

Is there a logical flow to the article? Yes

Does one part build upon the other? Yes

Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions? Yes

What would you suggest to improve? -

[edit] Answer 2

Answer here

[edit] Question 3 · TEXT

Grammar and style:

Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? Some small mistakes

Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 3

Answer here

[edit] Question 4 · TEXT

Figures and tables:

Are figures and tables clear?

Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 4

Answer here

[edit] Question 5 · TEXT

Interest and relevance:

Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 5

Answer here

[edit] Question 6 · TEXT

Depth of treatment:

Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 6

Answer here

[edit] Question 7 · TEXT

Annotated bibliography:

Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 7

Answer here

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