Talk:Business Case

Revision as of 13:17, 17 February 2018

Abstract Feedback

Text clarity Text is coherent

Language Good

Description of the tool/theory/concept Good, consider elaborating the tools for making a business case mentioned in the abstract

Purpose explanation Good, but consider who your reader is - is the project manager? project sponsor?

References Good

Relevance of article Very relevant. Perhaps consider, when writing the article, expanding on what the governance is around who decides/approves a business case in a project management organization?

Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Jonas

Note: since the article only contains abstract and empty headings, I will focus on what is there and recommendations :)

Question 1 · TEXT

Quality of the summary:

Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 1

As of right now, I think the abstract is good and finds the key focus. However, it would be nice if you could include some of the conclusions from the other sections (after you finish them).

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Structure and logic of the article:

Is the argument clear?

Is there a logical flow to the article?

Does one part build upon the other?

Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 2

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Grammar and style:

Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 3

The grammar and spelling are overall good and very readable, however, I found the following minor mistakes in the following sentences:

• The definitions of Business Case are discussed with its limitiations. -> The definitions of Business Case are discussed with its limitations.
• The Business Case is evaluated through a cost benefit -> The Business Case is evaluated through a cost-benefit
• justification for undertaking a project, in terms of -> the justification for undertaking a project, in terms of
• the benefits, cost and risk of alternative options and rationale for -> the benefits, cost, and risk of alternative options and rationale f

Question 4 · TEXT

Figures and tables:

Are figures and tables clear?

Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 4

Right now you only have youtube clips in the article and no figures. I like the youtube clips and they are informative, however, you should consider:

• Adding some picture which can be used to support your article
• The clips are nice, but it is very important that you discuss their credibility in your article (Everybody can make youtube clips)

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Interest and relevance:

Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

What would you suggest to improve?

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Question 6 · TEXT

Depth of treatment:

Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

What would you suggest to improve?

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Annotated bibliography:

Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

What would you suggest to improve?

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