Talk:Case Study: Updating Airplane Tracking Systems in the Australian Defense Force
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Revision as of 21:36, 18 September 2017
Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | The text sounds coherent and comprehensible |
| Language | OK |
| Brief description of the case | OK |
| Brief description of the challenge | The challenges has not been identified |
| Title of the Wiki | OK |
| References | OK |
Other
There is not initial abstract, the feedback has been made based on the Introduction and About the article sections.
The article should describe the challenges that
