Talk:Case Study: Updating Airplane Tracking Systems in the Australian Defense Force
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There is not initial abstract, the feedback has been made based on the ''Introduction'' and ''About the article'' sections. | There is not initial abstract, the feedback has been made based on the ''Introduction'' and ''About the article'' sections. | ||
| − | The article should describe the challenges the project faced and how this challenges were solved. | + | The article should describe the challenges the project faced and how this challenges were solved and provide the source in which the article is based. |
Latest revision as of 21:39, 18 September 2017
[edit] Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | The text sounds coherent and comprehensible |
| Language | OK |
| Brief description of the case | OK |
| Brief description of the challenge | The challenges has not been identified |
| Title of the Wiki | OK |
| References | OK |
[edit] Other
There is not initial abstract, the feedback has been made based on the Introduction and About the article sections.
The article should describe the challenges the project faced and how this challenges were solved and provide the source in which the article is based.
