Talk:Critical Chain Project Management to cope with uncertainty
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Mette: Hello, I like your idea and I like if you would add the topic you have written within the brakets. As you write yourself it would be nice to add something specific/different in the article. | Mette: Hello, I like your idea and I like if you would add the topic you have written within the brakets. As you write yourself it would be nice to add something specific/different in the article. | ||
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| + | Review3, s150794: | ||
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| + | '''Overall:''' | ||
| + | * My first impression of this article is that it is clear and straightforward, and looks good with clearly defined headings and sections, and there are descriptive pictures with explanation. | ||
| + | * You have a good academic language throughout the article. | ||
| + | * The article is a bit short, but I see that you have some more topics you want to write about. :) | ||
| + | '''Abstract:''' | ||
| + | * A good introduction to the term, but I'm not sure if you need the first sentence. | ||
| + | '''Theory of constraints:''' | ||
| + | * I like that you start with a short introduction of this topic. | ||
| + | * It think it is a smart way to highlight the implementation how you use the 5 points from the first paragraph to the next, with an adequate explanation. | ||
| + | '''Undesired effects of traditional approach:''' | ||
| + | * Looks good so far. I look forward to the rest | ||
| + | '''Some suggestions for improvement:''' | ||
| + | * There are some space between some sentences that may give the text less flow. Tips could be to make the first part of “Theory of construction” to make it to a coherent paragraph. | ||
| + | * Some sentences that where a bit long, which made it a bit hard to follow. A tip is to either divide of rewrite the sentences. Two examples: | ||
| + | ** “CCPM is an outgrowth of the Theory of Constraints(TOC) and was introduced in 1997 in Eliyahu M. Goldratt’s book, “Critical Chain”[2] in response to many projects resulted in larger duration, increased cost, and less derivable than expected.” | ||
| + | ** “TOC is a systems-management philosophy, originally applied to production system, based on the principle that any system must have a constraint that limits its output.” | ||
| + | * Some of the sentence had some grammar faults. I would looked a little on sentence structure. | ||
| + | * In addition to CCPM you could include a paragraph on risk, since you have this in the title. | ||
Revision as of 18:38, 22 September 2015
Mette: Hello, I like your idea and I like if you would add the topic you have written within the brakets. As you write yourself it would be nice to add something specific/different in the article.
Review3, s150794:
Overall:
- My first impression of this article is that it is clear and straightforward, and looks good with clearly defined headings and sections, and there are descriptive pictures with explanation.
- You have a good academic language throughout the article.
- The article is a bit short, but I see that you have some more topics you want to write about. :)
Abstract:
- A good introduction to the term, but I'm not sure if you need the first sentence.
Theory of constraints:
- I like that you start with a short introduction of this topic.
- It think it is a smart way to highlight the implementation how you use the 5 points from the first paragraph to the next, with an adequate explanation.
Undesired effects of traditional approach:
- Looks good so far. I look forward to the rest
Some suggestions for improvement:
- There are some space between some sentences that may give the text less flow. Tips could be to make the first part of “Theory of construction” to make it to a coherent paragraph.
- Some sentences that where a bit long, which made it a bit hard to follow. A tip is to either divide of rewrite the sentences. Two examples:
- “CCPM is an outgrowth of the Theory of Constraints(TOC) and was introduced in 1997 in Eliyahu M. Goldratt’s book, “Critical Chain”[2] in response to many projects resulted in larger duration, increased cost, and less derivable than expected.”
- “TOC is a systems-management philosophy, originally applied to production system, based on the principle that any system must have a constraint that limits its output.”
- Some of the sentence had some grammar faults. I would looked a little on sentence structure.
- In addition to CCPM you could include a paragraph on risk, since you have this in the title.
