Talk:Integrated Concurrent Engineering
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Revision as of 00:37, 14 February 2018
Abstract Feedback
Text clarity Text is coherent
Language Good, although be careful when using "are" and "is" appropriately
Description of the tool/theory/concept Explain what ICE is. The abstract can be slightly more elaborated
Purpose explanation Okay, but what purpose does this article serve in terms of project management? How do you measure "efficiency could increase?" Does efficiency increase as a result of better communication (as in better Project Communications Management)? This needs to clarified in the article
References Missing appropriate references to mandatory list of references
Relevance of article Consider the following:
- Who is the reader? Project Manager or Sponsor etc?
- Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search
