Talk:Kaizen Event - a managerial tool for problem-solving
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*Layout looks good in general. | *Layout looks good in general. | ||
*You are using the Wiki functions for keywords and references very nice. | *You are using the Wiki functions for keywords and references very nice. | ||
*When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use <nowiki>"#" instead of "*"</nowiki> | *When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use <nowiki>"#" instead of "*"</nowiki> | ||
| − | * | + | *You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this. |
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| + | ===Abstract=== | ||
| + | *The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract. | ||
Revision as of 16:52, 25 November 2014
Review by Nemo
Layout and Wiki-issues
- Layout looks good in general.
- You are using the Wiki functions for keywords and references very nice.
- When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use "#" instead of "*"
- You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this.
Abstract
- The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract.
