Talk:Kaizen Event - a managerial tool for problem-solving
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*The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract. | *The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract. | ||
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Revision as of 16:54, 25 November 2014
Review by Nemo
Layout and Wiki-issues
- Layout looks good in general.
- You are using the Wiki functions for keywords and references very nice.
- When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use "#" instead of "*"
- You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this.
Abstract
- The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract.
- Formulation is fine and keywords make sence:)
