Talk:Kaizen Event - a managerial tool for problem-solving
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*When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use <nowiki>"#" instead of "*"</nowiki> | *When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use <nowiki>"#" instead of "*"</nowiki> | ||
*You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this. | *You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this. | ||
| + | *You link to some sides that does not exist fx. "Kaizen" and "Kaizen Events". | ||
===Abstract=== | ===Abstract=== | ||
*The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract. | *The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract. | ||
*Formulation is fine and keywords make sence:) | *Formulation is fine and keywords make sence:) | ||
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| + | ===Introduction=== | ||
| + | *What are the 5 basic lean principles that you mention? It would be nice to mention them. | ||
Revision as of 17:00, 25 November 2014
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Review by Nemo
Layout and Wiki-issues
- Layout looks good in general.
- You are using the Wiki functions for keywords and references very nice.
- When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use "#" instead of "*"
- You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this.
- You link to some sides that does not exist fx. "Kaizen" and "Kaizen Events".
Abstract
- The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract.
- Formulation is fine and keywords make sence:)
Introduction
- What are the 5 basic lean principles that you mention? It would be nice to mention them.
