Talk:Kaizen Event - a managerial tool for problem-solving
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*You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this. | *You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this. | ||
*You link to some sides that does not exist fx. "Kaizen" and "Kaizen Events". | *You link to some sides that does not exist fx. "Kaizen" and "Kaizen Events". | ||
+ | *You are doing some quotes, which are very nice in general. I can recommend the function ''<nowiki><blockquote> xxx </blockquote></nowiki>'' | ||
===Abstract=== | ===Abstract=== | ||
*The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract. | *The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract. | ||
− | * | + | *Why is it limited to project management - what about programme and portfolio? |
+ | *The keywords make sence:) | ||
===Introduction=== | ===Introduction=== | ||
*What are the 5 basic lean principles that you mention? It would be nice to mention them. | *What are the 5 basic lean principles that you mention? It would be nice to mention them. |
Revision as of 17:13, 25 November 2014
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Review by Nemo
Layout and Wiki-issues
- Layout looks good in general.
- You are using the Wiki functions for keywords and references very nice.
- When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use "#" instead of "*"
- You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this.
- You link to some sides that does not exist fx. "Kaizen" and "Kaizen Events".
- You are doing some quotes, which are very nice in general. I can recommend the function <blockquote> xxx </blockquote>
Abstract
- The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract.
- Why is it limited to project management - what about programme and portfolio?
- The keywords make sence:)
Introduction
- What are the 5 basic lean principles that you mention? It would be nice to mention them.