Talk:Lean construction
From apppm
REVIEW by Liclawio
- In general, a very nice setup of wikipage. Seems like proper use of the wiki platform.
- Very good overview article of the theory on the field, and following the setup more or less to the letter
- Really good length of article, especially considering last parts still missing at current time.
- Nice structure overview. Concise sentences and paragraphs making it easy to read though the article.
- In general good language. However, you should consider a quick spell check in Word or other software also including grammar check (fx. customer). Also spell check figures and tables
- Consider whether the article should be written in UK or US English and/or look through spelling. Both words with ou and only o in text (fx. labour/behaviors). Also remember use of “z” vs “s” when considering UK vs US
- Consider single/plural forms (is/are, with/without “s” on endings).
- Nice figures. Could perhaps be included, explained of referenced a bit more through the text. Also a bit difficult to see, whether own figures/tables or taken from elsewhere, and in that case whether they are copyright protected.
