Talk:Managing Successful Programmes (MSP)
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'''Description of the tool/theory/concept''' Good and easy to follow, but how does this relate to project magement rather than just organizational management or day-to-day problem solving at work? This should be emphasized and clarified in the abstract | '''Description of the tool/theory/concept''' Good and easy to follow, but how does this relate to project magement rather than just organizational management or day-to-day problem solving at work? This should be emphasized and clarified in the abstract | ||
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Abstract Feedback
Text clarity Text is coherent
Language Minor errors e.g. " To achieve this, the he main idea is to sub-divide..." - remove "he"?
Description of the tool/theory/concept Good and easy to follow, but how does this relate to project magement rather than just organizational management or day-to-day problem solving at work? This should be emphasized and clarified in the abstract
Purpose explanation Good, but can improved once the article scope is narrowed down to a project management knowledge area or areas. Consider briefly explaining the structure of the article and the points to be discussed to set the reader's expectations
References Missing appropriate references to mandatory list of references
Relevance of article Consider the following:
- Who is the reader? Project Manager or Sponsor ect?
- What kind of issues can be tackled using future workshop?
- Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search
