Talk:Managing Uncertainty and Risk on the Project
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Anna: It is an interesting and very relevant topic, however, I would suggest that you try to narrow down the scope and focus your article on one method/tool that can be applied for managing uncertainty and risk in a project. Remember that your article has to fit one of the two article types and the required structure :) | Anna: It is an interesting and very relevant topic, however, I would suggest that you try to narrow down the scope and focus your article on one method/tool that can be applied for managing uncertainty and risk in a project. Remember that your article has to fit one of the two article types and the required structure :) | ||
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*Great use of English and nice sentences structure | *Great use of English and nice sentences structure | ||
*Great subject but, very broad, needs to be narrowed a little bit | *Great subject but, very broad, needs to be narrowed a little bit | ||
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*Implementations would narrow the whole subject and make it more interesting | *Implementations would narrow the whole subject and make it more interesting | ||
Generally speaking a more wiki style text, with hyperlinks,more bibliography and see also section would be more appropriate to this great text. | Generally speaking a more wiki style text, with hyperlinks,more bibliography and see also section would be more appropriate to this great text. | ||
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| + | * abstract at the beginning | ||
| + | * captions and figure numbering | ||
| + | * gramatically correct. easy and pleasant to read | ||
| + | * nice references to the graphs - everything is explained nicely | ||
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| + | * separate consequences in the definitions into paragraphs | ||
| + | * "In the beginning of the a project the uncertainty is very high and depending on the size of the project and to decrease the mission uncertainty it can some extend be used” - I think you're missing something at some point | ||
| + | * really broad - maybe give some methods that are used to minimize risk and uncertainty cause this would stick more with the method type of article | ||
| + | * Advantages and limitations ? (required in the method type article) | ||
| + | * Add more references for higher credibility ;) | ||
| + | * maybe restructure the definition section, to make the article easier to scan quickly | ||
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| + | Conclusion: Great article and properly written, but needs to be restructured a bit for quicker scanning of the article and to fit the method article type. | ||
Revision as of 22:23, 22 September 2015
Review1, Buurbuur: - I found the topic very interesting and very relevant for this course. - Good that many point are illustrated with an appropriate figure. - However I find the scope very broad, maybe choose only to focus on project or portofolio management. - In the definition section i find it difficult to understand and navigate between all the different definitions, maybe it could make it more easy and understandable if you make a grid to show the difference. Or list them up on bulletspoints - Secure that the article fit to one of the two article types i relation to the required topics - However I find the figures clear and understandable - Good that there are references on every figure
Anna: It is an interesting and very relevant topic, however, I would suggest that you try to narrow down the scope and focus your article on one method/tool that can be applied for managing uncertainty and risk in a project. Remember that your article has to fit one of the two article types and the required structure :)
Reviewer 2:Andkamp
- Great use of English and nice sentences structure
- Great subject but, very broad, needs to be narrowed a little bit
- Nice figures, but the matrix with the papers is something I expected to be illustrated in matrix and not a Figure, in order to maintain the wiki style of the article.
- Nice Referencing of the figures, although it hadn't any inter-wiki links or in text links.
- The interest of a practitioner could be greater if there was more focusing in aspects of this subject.
- Profound relation with project management
- The good structure assures logical flow
- Extremely poor reference material for such extended article, that could lead someone with bad intensions to think that there's some amount of plagiarism
- Expected to see pros/cons
- Implementations would narrow the whole subject and make it more interesting
Generally speaking a more wiki style text, with hyperlinks,more bibliography and see also section would be more appropriate to this great text.
Reviewer 3 - s141938
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- abstract at the beginning
- captions and figure numbering
- gramatically correct. easy and pleasant to read
- nice references to the graphs - everything is explained nicely
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- separate consequences in the definitions into paragraphs
- "In the beginning of the a project the uncertainty is very high and depending on the size of the project and to decrease the mission uncertainty it can some extend be used” - I think you're missing something at some point
- really broad - maybe give some methods that are used to minimize risk and uncertainty cause this would stick more with the method type of article
- Advantages and limitations ? (required in the method type article)
- Add more references for higher credibility ;)
- maybe restructure the definition section, to make the article easier to scan quickly
Conclusion: Great article and properly written, but needs to be restructured a bit for quicker scanning of the article and to fit the method article type.
