Talk:Product development and portfolio management processes at LEGO
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Hello, I like the idea for your "case study article". Please make sure to use that structure. I would also suggest to focus on one aspect of Lego, i.e. portfolio management or risk management (in the context of new PD). I do not think it would be appropriate to talk about the Lego PD process "in general" for this class. | Hello, I like the idea for your "case study article". Please make sure to use that structure. I would also suggest to focus on one aspect of Lego, i.e. portfolio management or risk management (in the context of new PD). I do not think it would be appropriate to talk about the Lego PD process "in general" for this class. | ||
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| + | Alex161 (reviewer 2): I like so much the Lego case study and it is very nice to read. I found the structure of the article well structured, with an enganging style and not hard to follow. | ||
| + | I think the main points of the article are well illustrated with figures. It is understandable. | ||
| + | Looking at the content i think your ‘’case study ‘’ is related with the course , maybe I would say that the part about the risk is a bit small compared with the size of the topic ( Risk management ). It follows a logical flow and i liked the started summary. Maybe you can add an annoted bibliography for each source. | ||
| + | In general this is a very positive feedback I liked so much reading your article . | ||
Revision as of 16:54, 22 September 2015
Hello, I like the idea for your "case study article". Please make sure to use that structure. I would also suggest to focus on one aspect of Lego, i.e. portfolio management or risk management (in the context of new PD). I do not think it would be appropriate to talk about the Lego PD process "in general" for this class.
Alex161 (reviewer 2): I like so much the Lego case study and it is very nice to read. I found the structure of the article well structured, with an enganging style and not hard to follow.
I think the main points of the article are well illustrated with figures. It is understandable.
Looking at the content i think your ‘’case study ‘’ is related with the course , maybe I would say that the part about the risk is a bit small compared with the size of the topic ( Risk management ). It follows a logical flow and i liked the started summary. Maybe you can add an annoted bibliography for each source.
In general this is a very positive feedback I liked so much reading your article .
