Talk:Projects in Controlled Environments, a process-based approach for project management

Mette: Hey, I like your idea. Nice to see that you are already a long way with your article. I feel that maybe you should limit what you want to tell in the article and thereby make the article more concrete. Keep an overview of the structure and remember the structure of a "method article".

Reviewer 1 (s141573)

I think the overall article presents a good the structure, detailed explanation and covers all the aspects to be taken into account.

However sometimes it seems disconnected with the project management context.

I found hard to understand what’s the role of this model in the overall project management process.

In my opinion, you could add at the introductory part more information about the general philosophy before to start talking about the method.

I’d also suggest to focus more on the connection between the model and the benefits it can deliver to a project (ch. 4 benefit – ch 5. Limitations). I think this part could be the most interesting of the whole article, since it describes the applications of the model.

In addition, I’d suggest to check the English fluency (ex. Continued business justification)

Good luck with the rest of the course!

Reviewer 2:s142911

• You are following the “methods” structure but in that case I would add also a section about the applications of the method.
• The structure seems good to me. It give also a logical flow through the article. Nice that you have almost completed.
• Sometimes you have used abbreviations even thought in a scientific paper must be avoided.
• Remember to name all the figure and add a reference to them, If not made by you.
• From a personal point of view, I found the figures placed in the middle of the page a bit confusing. Furthermore, they make the article looks longer since they require much more space. Usually Wikipedia pages have the figures on the side.
• With the understanding that I do not have any knowledge about PRINCE2, the article length seems a bit excessive (around 4500 words)
• I would add references in order to support some sentences. (i.e. Manage by exception: this principle allow a high reduction of problem). In addition, remember to add a brief summary of all the sources.