Talk:Risk Management Overview
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| − | + | The abstract is very clear and concise. I like the fact that you mentioned that the article would only focus on the risks/threats and not the opportunities, which makes the direction of the article clear. I would maybe suggest that you move this last sentence higher in the paragraph just to make it transparent from the beginning what direction you are going for. | |
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Abstract Feedback
Text clarity Text is coherent
Language Good
Description of the tool/theory/concept Very thoroughly explained and good momentum
Purpose explanation Well addressed, perhaps expand on whether or not the Risk Management Process applies more to a specific industry? E.g. Oil and Gas where risk is a serious topic (DONE)
References Good references. Look at chapter 11 in PMBOK to include further references related to risk in project management context (DONE)
Relevance of article Very relevant but consider to:
- Ensure that the risk management process concept explanation is embedded in a project management context
- Avoid focusing too much on risk management from an organizational/operational perspective, but more project managerial, e.g. don't talk about carrying out a risk assessment for operating an oil rig (DONE?)
- Consult chapter 11 in PMBOK for inspiration (DONE)
- Consult with Josef if in doubt as he is very knowledgeable about project risk management
Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Briet
Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 1
The abstract is very clear and concise. I like the fact that you mentioned that the article would only focus on the risks/threats and not the opportunities, which makes the direction of the article clear. I would maybe suggest that you move this last sentence higher in the paragraph just to make it transparent from the beginning what direction you are going for.
Question 2 · TEXT
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 2
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Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 3
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Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 4
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Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 5
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Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 6
Question 7 · TEXT
Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
