Talk:Stakeholder Analysis
From apppm
- I can see that you are well on your way, but that there is still some work to do.
- I can see that you have been using the referencing correctly, but you are still missing some references to other peoples wiki articles for example SWOT
- You can maybe make clear what shareholder or CSR is by referencing to it somewhere else.
- There are some spelling mistakes and some grammar mistakes, maybe by adding your text to word you can find some of them
- I think the structure looks pretty good but maybe you should have the introduction above the content list and background inbetween introduction and process and move the benefits down?
- You have only used around 1500 words so you still have plenty to finish your article
- I think that you have made some good visualizations that are coherent in color and are well described, do you maybe have a suggestion on a way of vizualizing a 2D mapping? Or a reference?
- I like that yo have used some examples like the metro station, maybe you have some more
- I think you are on your way to creating an informative wiki article, if there is time and you would like then I can maybe have a look at it again when you are done. I will come back and check the discussion to see what you think, hope some of the feedback helped.
