Talk:Systems Engineering versus Project Management, a comparative study

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== Feedback by Lasse Madsen ==
 
== Feedback by Lasse Madsen ==
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Revision as of 18:17, 25 November 2014

Feedback by Lasse Madsen

Fist impression:

  • The article is very well structured, and invites the reader to read along.
  • The grammar and spelling is very good, and the content is easy to understand

Overall structure
i miss some more WIKI formatting, ie.

    • bullet points (*),
    • Categories: [[Categories:Management]]
    • References: [[project management]]
    • Additional reading section
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