Talk:The benefits of systems engineering
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| + | KB1991, reviewer 3: | ||
| + | * I have an idea that the article isn’t completely finished yet ☺ But when looking at the structure of it and the headlines it looks good - Both the formatting and the read threat. | ||
| + | * Good that you have planned to implement figures to illustrate the text. | ||
| + | * There are a few mistakes where words have been swapped, like writing ‘with’ instead of ‘which’. | ||
| + | * Good that there are references to all the text – And looks like the sources is of good quality. | ||
| + | * Would have been nice to read more of the article ☺ | ||
Revision as of 15:48, 22 September 2015
Mette: Looking forward to read more of your article when it is more completed.
KB1991, reviewer 3:
- I have an idea that the article isn’t completely finished yet ☺ But when looking at the structure of it and the headlines it looks good - Both the formatting and the read threat.
- Good that you have planned to implement figures to illustrate the text.
- There are a few mistakes where words have been swapped, like writing ‘with’ instead of ‘which’.
- Good that there are references to all the text – And looks like the sources is of good quality.
- Would have been nice to read more of the article ☺
