Talk:V-Model

Revision as of 11:06, 24 September 2015

Anna: Very nice topic and method you have chosen. I don't have a lot of comments as it seems that you are well within the requirements for the article and that you have already created a great structure including the application and limitations.

Review 1: s150905

Hi, the illustration of the method is really engaging and interesting for the subject

Formal aspects

• The article follow the right method’s structure.
• The few images used are very focused and understandable.
• There is a lack in blank spaces and paragraphs’ division in the section, which might help the reader.

Content

• The introduction is very clear and illustrative.
• The topic clearly developed, underling the essential aspects in a precise way.
• The method description maybe seems sometimes a little much specific and the reader could find difficulties in following the parts depicted; but here the example you have made could act as a helper.
• Not all the references appear to be of high quality

Ch.filis, Review 2: Hello, and straight to the point. Really analytical explanation and description of the method. I had the opportunity while reading it, to understand how the methods works.

Formal Aspects:

• The article has a logical flow and every part is “built” on another
• I could not notice any obvious grammar mistakes
• The images illustrate your writings in a clear and understandable way

Content Aspects:

• The introduction describes the model in a clear way
• Analysis in depth for all the phases required in order to formulate the model
• Not so clear how the model was used in the industry
• Understandable description of the model’s limitations and advantages as well
• Quite few references for so extensive analysis but probably the author’s experience can cover parts of the subject