Talk:V-Model
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Anna: Very nice topic and method you have chosen. I don't have a lot of comments as it seems that you are well within the requirements for the article and that you have already created a great structure including the application and limitations. | Anna: Very nice topic and method you have chosen. I don't have a lot of comments as it seems that you are well within the requirements for the article and that you have already created a great structure including the application and limitations. | ||
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| + | s150905, Review 1: | ||
| + | Hi, the illustration of the method is really engaging and interesting for the subject | ||
| + | Formal aspects | ||
| + | * The article follow the right method’s structure. | ||
| + | * The few images used are very focused and understandable. | ||
| + | * There is a lack in blank spaces and paragraphs’ division in the section, which might help the reader. | ||
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| + | Content | ||
| + | * The introduction is very clear and illustrative. | ||
| + | * The topic clearly developed, underling the essential aspects in a precise way. | ||
| + | * The method description maybe seems sometimes a little much specific and the reader could find difficulties in following the parts depicted; but here the example you have made could act as a helper. | ||
| + | * Not all the references appear to be of high quality | ||
Revision as of 18:00, 22 September 2015
Anna: Very nice topic and method you have chosen. I don't have a lot of comments as it seems that you are well within the requirements for the article and that you have already created a great structure including the application and limitations.
s150905, Review 1: Hi, the illustration of the method is really engaging and interesting for the subject Formal aspects
- The article follow the right method’s structure.
- The few images used are very focused and understandable.
- There is a lack in blank spaces and paragraphs’ division in the section, which might help the reader.
Content
- The introduction is very clear and illustrative.
- The topic clearly developed, underling the essential aspects in a precise way.
- The method description maybe seems sometimes a little much specific and the reader could find difficulties in following the parts depicted; but here the example you have made could act as a helper.
- Not all the references appear to be of high quality
