Talk:Work Breakdown Structure (WBS)
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Mette: I like your idea for a topic. I seems like you have a clear idea of what to write the article about and have remembered the structure for a "method article". Maybe you could short mention the Goal Breakdown Structure (GBS) in the article and outline the different. | Mette: I like your idea for a topic. I seems like you have a clear idea of what to write the article about and have remembered the structure for a "method article". Maybe you could short mention the Goal Breakdown Structure (GBS) in the article and outline the different. | ||
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| + | Reviewer 1: s142581 | ||
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| + | * The topic was a wise choice, very relevant for practitioners and related to the course. | ||
| + | * Another positive aspect is that it follows the method structure. | ||
| + | * In addition, it has a good structure of sections and you did a good job with the references. | ||
| + | * I would suggest to separate the text into more paragraphs, especially in sections like ''History'' and ''Value breakdown structure''. This way, you could improve the reading flow. | ||
| + | * Also, I recommend you to be careful with “,” and “.”. You should separate some sentences, for example: | ||
| + | ** ''Moreover, during the project executions the percentage of steps completed must be included. This ensure better control and guidance in case of any changes during the project development''. | ||
| + | ** ''During 1962, United State Airforce released “STUDY OF METHODS FOR EVALUATION OF THE PERT/COST MANAGEMENT SYSTEM”. In this document WBS was mention as a useful tool for controlling and planning large acquisition projects''. | ||
| + | ** ''WBS could be considered a general tool that can be use in most of projects and program, due to this reason a WBS to another may vary to best adapts the project manager needs''. | ||
| + | * Also, you should revise the grammar carefully. For example: | ||
| + | ** must includes = must include | ||
| + | ** since this tool is use = since this tool is used | ||
| + | * I would suggest that you transform the questions in the ''Main characteristics'' section into indirect questions. | ||
| + | * In addition, be careful with the paragraph spacing. | ||
| + | * You should introduce with a sentence the bullet points at the end of the ''Main characteristics'' section. | ||
| + | * I think you should rephrase the sentence “The most common method for decomposing a WBS are the following methods”. In addition, I recommend that you continue the explanation to every concept in the same line. | ||
| + | * Although you have noted “Picture under construction”, do not forget to numerate them and align them properly in the text. I would also suggest that you mention the figures in the text. | ||
| + | * I think you should use “:” after ''Nothing extra'' and ''Nothing Missing''. | ||
| + | * Finally, correct the spelling of the words ''advantages'' and ''disadvantages'' in the last section title. | ||
Revision as of 20:18, 22 September 2015
Mette: I like your idea for a topic. I seems like you have a clear idea of what to write the article about and have remembered the structure for a "method article". Maybe you could short mention the Goal Breakdown Structure (GBS) in the article and outline the different.
Reviewer 1: s142581
- The topic was a wise choice, very relevant for practitioners and related to the course.
- Another positive aspect is that it follows the method structure.
- In addition, it has a good structure of sections and you did a good job with the references.
- I would suggest to separate the text into more paragraphs, especially in sections like History and Value breakdown structure. This way, you could improve the reading flow.
- Also, I recommend you to be careful with “,” and “.”. You should separate some sentences, for example:
- Moreover, during the project executions the percentage of steps completed must be included. This ensure better control and guidance in case of any changes during the project development.
- During 1962, United State Airforce released “STUDY OF METHODS FOR EVALUATION OF THE PERT/COST MANAGEMENT SYSTEM”. In this document WBS was mention as a useful tool for controlling and planning large acquisition projects.
- WBS could be considered a general tool that can be use in most of projects and program, due to this reason a WBS to another may vary to best adapts the project manager needs.
- Also, you should revise the grammar carefully. For example:
- must includes = must include
- since this tool is use = since this tool is used
- I would suggest that you transform the questions in the Main characteristics section into indirect questions.
- In addition, be careful with the paragraph spacing.
- You should introduce with a sentence the bullet points at the end of the Main characteristics section.
- I think you should rephrase the sentence “The most common method for decomposing a WBS are the following methods”. In addition, I recommend that you continue the explanation to every concept in the same line.
- Although you have noted “Picture under construction”, do not forget to numerate them and align them properly in the text. I would also suggest that you mention the figures in the text.
- I think you should use “:” after Nothing extra and Nothing Missing.
- Finally, correct the spelling of the words advantages and disadvantages in the last section title.
