Talk:Work Breakdown Structure in Construction Management

Abstract Feedback

Text clarity Text is good, but avoid writing bullet points in the abstract - the text should flow

Language Good

Description of the tool/theory/concept Well addressed, but try to use the word "scope" in the abstract - as in a work breakdown structure is a tool used breakdown the scope of a project

Purpose explanation Good, but needs development. Consider:

1. Who is the reader? Project Manager or team etc?

References Missing references to the list of mandatory references/standards

Relevance of article Consider the following:

1. It is okay to use examples from the Metro Cityring project, but remember it is not allowed to write the article as a case study. The course requirements have changed
2. Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search