Talk:Kotter's 8- Step Change Model
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Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Ida Smidt
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Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear? Yes, very clear.
What would you suggest to improve? PMI-reference - also a way of linking to program management
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Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article? Yes (from what is written)
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
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Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
What would you suggest to improve?
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Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
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Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance? Yes
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant? Yes, if linked to program management
What would you suggest to improve?
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Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
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Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
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Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Mads Grøndal
Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear? Yes
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 1
I am not sure that Kotter's change model is out of scope for this course
Question 2 · TEXT
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 2
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Question 3 · TEXT
Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? yes
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words? yes
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 3
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Question 4 · TEXT
Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear? n/a
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way? n/a
What would you suggest to improve?
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Question 5 · TEXT
Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance? Can be
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant? No
What would you suggest to improve?
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Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 6
Answer here
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Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work? n/a
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article? n/a
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion? n/a
What would you suggest to improve?
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Abstract Feedback
Text Clarity; Ok.
Language; Ok.
References; missing references related to the standards
The abstract sounds well, but the topic is out of scope, you are describing the model from a pure organizational point of view in a organizational environment, try to relate the topic within a project/program/portfolio environment.
If you want to continue with the topic, try to find relevant literature that shows this model in the course context.
Please check again the point 5, Individual Assignment of the Course handbook and Reference Reading material for the Wiki Assignment and Project Work.
