Talk:Project Vision Statement
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Grammar and spelling: Is the text readable and free of formal errors? LBH: The gramme is en general fine. | Grammar and spelling: Is the text readable and free of formal errors? LBH: The gramme is en general fine. | ||
− | Structure and logical flow: Is every part of the article informative and necessary to communicate the core message? LBH: Be more explicit in the abstract of what it is you want investigate. More than just the examples. | + | Structure and logical flow: Is every part of the article informative and necessary to communicate the core message? |
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+ | - Be more explicit in the abstract of what it is you want investigate. More than just the examples. | ||
+ | - Second sections headline, is it really called "the big idea"? | ||
What do you like? What should be improved, and how? | What do you like? What should be improved, and how? | ||
Content: Is the article convincing? Is it complete? Is it relevant an “deep” enough? What parts do you like? What parts need to be improve | Content: Is the article convincing? Is it complete? Is it relevant an “deep” enough? What parts do you like? What parts need to be improve |
Revision as of 17:27, 25 February 2019
Grammar and spelling: Is the text readable and free of formal errors? LBH: The gramme is en general fine.
Structure and logical flow: Is every part of the article informative and necessary to communicate the core message? LBH: - Be more explicit in the abstract of what it is you want investigate. More than just the examples. - Second sections headline, is it really called "the big idea"?
What do you like? What should be improved, and how?
Content: Is the article convincing? Is it complete? Is it relevant an “deep” enough? What parts do you like? What parts need to be improve