Talk:Value Stream Mapping in Program Management
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== Feedback from Tallimac == | == Feedback from Tallimac == | ||
| − | *"The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. | + | *"The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :) |
| − | You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :) | + | |
*really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other | *really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other | ||
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*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff | *Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff | ||
*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Class"></ref> | *<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Class"></ref> | ||
| + | <references/> | ||
*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now | *I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now | ||
Revision as of 16:12, 25 November 2014
Feedback from Tallimac
- "The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)
- really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other
- Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
- [1]. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type [2]
- I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now
