Talk:Multi project management

Revision as of 17:25, 22 September 2015

Josef: Hello, thank you for the abstract. "Multi project management" is a fairly broad category. I suggest that you re-think after todays program management lecture if you would like to take a program management or portfolio management angle. All the topics you raise are relevant, but there are also potentially a lot more that you could cover. So it is not entirely clear to me why you chose that particular subset. I would suggest to either focus on one particular aspect, or provide a more high-level overview that can then be "complete". Also please make sure to follow the suggested structure.

Reviewer 3: Alise

• A well-written article and nice structure.
• I don’t think you should use “I” and “we” in the article. It is supposed to be objective, and makes it look less professional.
• Try not to use questions. Try to structure it in a different way.
• I like the sentence you use to explain the difference. But since you have made it such a big deal, maybe use the italic or bold to highlight it.
• Try to stay away from words like “actually”, “just” and “only”. Depending on how they are used in a sentence it may not sound very professional.
• What are the 2 steps before reaching a Program Management point of view? Tell the reader where he or she will read about it.
• I like the pictures and how they relate to the text. They are not, however, directly mentioned in the text.
• Earlier, it was not right to start a sentence with “and” or “but”. This has changed, but you might just be aware of it and not use it all the time.
• Some sentences are very long. Try to shorten them.
• Remember references!

Wiki feedback From s117318

• Nice figures
• Great structure, easy o follow the topics
• Figure 1 could fit into the text
• For this sentence: In multiple project management, I will study the management of the schedules (Try to avoid using "I")
• Try to avoid using words as "actually".
• Easy to understand
• Create References to Figures you have added and tell why you have added these.
• Be specific, fx. Now, we will stop to see (Remove this, and write something more specific)
• Perhaps a brief discussion/conclusion?
• Make this setence with bold or as SubTopic: How Program Management can solve some uncertainty problem in a MPM?
• An idea: 4. Limitations of Program Management approach

4.1 Inability to “stick” with the project scope: 4.2 ecc..

• Be aware of adding more words.
• Be aware of gramma,
• Could Link to other Wiki Articles, like Project Management
• Remember References
• Remember biography

Wiki feedback from s142823

• Very interesting topic, it seems a bit challenging to cover within 3000 words but apparently you succeeded : reading your article hold the attention and it gives the feeling to learn a new concept
• Some grammatical mistakes
• Layout and article structure globally pleasant
• Try to be more objective in the article, avoid the words such as “I”, “me”, or even “you”.
• Try to avoid words such as “actually”, or “but” too often.
• Nice and clear pictures, but they should be more introduced and linked in the text