Talk:Value Stream Mapping in Program Management
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| + | * The pointed sections seems nice and would have been interesting to read. Especially the example would be nice to get to know the method. | ||
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| + | * It would be nice for the reader if the VSA and VSM are explained simply in the start of the introduction, but maybe it is not done so far. | ||
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| + | * Again it would be good with more then the abstract and very short introduction. | ||
Revision as of 18:22, 25 November 2014
Feedback from Tallimac
- "The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)
- really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other
- Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
- This is done like this [1]. If you use the same ref again just type this [1]
References
- I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now
Comments from "Apppm student"
- The pointed sections seems nice and would have been interesting to read. Especially the example would be nice to get to know the method.
- It would be nice for the reader if the VSA and VSM are explained simply in the start of the introduction, but maybe it is not done so far.
- Again it would be good with more then the abstract and very short introduction.
