Talk:Project Vision Statement

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Grammar and spelling: Is the text readable and free of formal errors? LBH: The gramme is en general fine.  
 
Grammar and spelling: Is the text readable and free of formal errors? LBH: The gramme is en general fine.  
  
Structure and logical flow: Is every part of the article informative and necessary to communicate the core message? LBH: Be more explicit in the abstract of what it is you want investigate. More than just the examples.  
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Structure and logical flow: Is every part of the article informative and necessary to communicate the core message?  
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LBH:  
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- Be more explicit in the abstract of what it is you want investigate. More than just the examples.  
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- Second sections headline, is it really called "the big idea"? 
 
   
 
   
 
What do you like? What should be improved, and how?
 
What do you like? What should be improved, and how?
  
 
Content: Is the article convincing? Is it complete? Is it relevant an “deep” enough? What parts do you like? What parts need to be improve
 
Content: Is the article convincing? Is it complete? Is it relevant an “deep” enough? What parts do you like? What parts need to be improve

Revision as of 18:27, 25 February 2019

Grammar and spelling: Is the text readable and free of formal errors? LBH: The gramme is en general fine.

Structure and logical flow: Is every part of the article informative and necessary to communicate the core message? LBH: - Be more explicit in the abstract of what it is you want investigate. More than just the examples. - Second sections headline, is it really called "the big idea"?

What do you like? What should be improved, and how?

Content: Is the article convincing? Is it complete? Is it relevant an “deep” enough? What parts do you like? What parts need to be improve

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