Talk:Value Stream Mapping in Program Management

Revision as of 16:26, 4 December 2014

Feedback from Tallimac

• "The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)

• really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other

• Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
• This is done like this ^[1]. If you use the same ref again just type this ^[1]

References

1. ↑ ^{1.0 1.1} What

• I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

Comments from "Pppm student"

• The pointed sections seems nice and would have been interesting to read. Especially the example would be nice to get to know the method.

• It would be nice for the reader if the VSA and VSM are explained simply in the start of the introduction, but maybe it is not done so far.

• Again it would be good with more then the abstract and very short introduction.

Response to the Peer Review

To Tallimac

• The headline issue has been solved by reformulating the section
• The difference between VSA and VSM has been farther distinguished
• References have been made
• References have been made

To PPPM Student

• The plan about examples has been rejected, because of property rights everywhere
• VSA/VSM has been described briefly in the introduction
• The article has been extended in quality and quantity

Thanks for your reviews!