Talk:A method to analyze visualizations in project management as boundary objects

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review2, s150894

Overall:

  • The subject seems interesting!
  • It is easy to understand and follow the article. The language is good and clear.
  • I like that you link to other terms that you use in your article and that you give clear examples, it give a better flow in the text.
  • I am excited to read the rest of the article.

Some suggestions for improvement:

  • There are not a lot to improve at your text. It is good and reflected.
  • There are one line in the text I did not quite understand: “ “[Boundary objects] provides a basis upon which actors from different social worlds can achieve a common understanding despite their differing interests and perceptions" Garrety and Badham social worlds different types of boundaries”. This is from the “Boundary objects”.
  • The introduction could be called the abstract and you could use some images, to make your points clearer.
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