Talk:Value Stream Mapping in Program Management

Feedback from Tallimac

• "The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)

• really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other

• Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
• This is done like this . If you use the same ref again just type this

References

• I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now