Talk:Multi project management
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Josef: Hello, thank you for the abstract. "Multi project management" is a fairly broad category. I suggest that you re-think after todays program management lecture if you would like to take a program management or portfolio management angle. All the topics you raise are relevant, but there are also potentially a lot more that you could cover. So it is not entirely clear to me why you chose that particular subset. I would suggest to either focus on one particular aspect, or provide a more high-level overview that can then be "complete". Also please make sure to follow the suggested structure. | Josef: Hello, thank you for the abstract. "Multi project management" is a fairly broad category. I suggest that you re-think after todays program management lecture if you would like to take a program management or portfolio management angle. All the topics you raise are relevant, but there are also potentially a lot more that you could cover. So it is not entirely clear to me why you chose that particular subset. I would suggest to either focus on one particular aspect, or provide a more high-level overview that can then be "complete". Also please make sure to follow the suggested structure. | ||
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| + | * A well-written article and nice structure. | ||
| + | * I don’t think you should use “I” and “we” in the article. It is supposed to be objective, and makes it look less professional. | ||
| + | * Try not to use questions. Try to structure it in a different way. | ||
| + | * I like the sentence you use to explain the difference. But since you have made it such a big deal, maybe use the italic or bold to highlight it. | ||
| + | * Try to stay away from words like “actually”, “just” and “only”. Depending on how they are used in a sentence it may not sound very professional. | ||
| + | * What are the 2 steps before reaching a Program Management point of view? Tell the reader where he or she will read about it. | ||
| + | * I like the pictures and how they relate to the text. They are not, however, directly mentioned in the text. | ||
| + | * Earlier, it was not right to start a sentence with “and” or “but”. This has changed, but you might just be aware of it and not use it all the time. | ||
| + | * Some sentences are very long. Try to shorten them. | ||
| + | * Remember references! | ||
Revision as of 17:38, 22 September 2015
Josef: Hello, thank you for the abstract. "Multi project management" is a fairly broad category. I suggest that you re-think after todays program management lecture if you would like to take a program management or portfolio management angle. All the topics you raise are relevant, but there are also potentially a lot more that you could cover. So it is not entirely clear to me why you chose that particular subset. I would suggest to either focus on one particular aspect, or provide a more high-level overview that can then be "complete". Also please make sure to follow the suggested structure.
Reviewer 3: Alise
- A well-written article and nice structure.
- I don’t think you should use “I” and “we” in the article. It is supposed to be objective, and makes it look less professional.
- Try not to use questions. Try to structure it in a different way.
- I like the sentence you use to explain the difference. But since you have made it such a big deal, maybe use the italic or bold to highlight it.
- Try to stay away from words like “actually”, “just” and “only”. Depending on how they are used in a sentence it may not sound very professional.
- What are the 2 steps before reaching a Program Management point of view? Tell the reader where he or she will read about it.
- I like the pictures and how they relate to the text. They are not, however, directly mentioned in the text.
- Earlier, it was not right to start a sentence with “and” or “but”. This has changed, but you might just be aware of it and not use it all the time.
- Some sentences are very long. Try to shorten them.
- Remember references!
