Talk:Scrum vs. Waterfall Methodology

Abstract Feedback

Text clarity Text is good, but needs expansion

Language Minor errors e.g. writing "showed" when "shown" is meant. Avoid first person narrative

Description of the tool/theory/concept Go back to basics, and briefly explain what scrum and waterfall is in one line. The abstract needs expansion

Purpose explanation Good, but needs development. Consider:

1. Who is the reader? Project Manager or team etc?
2. Are you focusing on a particular industry or is this more generic?

References Good references, but make sure to add them in the "references" section. Try to find if the methods in your article are related with the standards, if not find relevant literature

Relevance of article Consider the following:

1. Scrum is usually referred to in IT projects, whereas Agile is used more generically
2. Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search