Talk:Value Stream Mapping in Program Management

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== Feedback from Tallimac ==
 
== Feedback from Tallimac ==
  
*"The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything.
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*"The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)  
You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)  
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*really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other
 
*really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other
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*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
 
*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
 
*<ref name="Name"> What  </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Class"></ref>
 
*<ref name="Name"> What  </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Class"></ref>
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<references/>
  
 
*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now
 
*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

Revision as of 17:12, 25 November 2014

Feedback from Tallimac

  • "The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)
  • really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other
  • Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
  • [1]. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type [2]
  1. What
  2. Cite error: Invalid <ref> tag; no text was provided for refs named Class
  • I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now
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