Talk:Value Stream Mapping in Program Management

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Feedback from Tallimac

  • "The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything.

You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)

  • really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other
  • Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
  • [1]. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type [2]
  • I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

Cite error: <ref> tags exist, but no <references/> tag was found
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